Week 9 Day 1: End Tag Critique

Today we had full class critiques of our end tags/kinetic logos.  The biggest critique for my project was the use of sound, which I knew would be an issue.  One person suggested I cut it down to one or two separate clips, instead of three.  I'm also considering, if I redo the piece, to find or compose (I wish...) a piece of music that would fit the animation & theme.